Review Detail of CrazyBanana in Battle of Ascension
Review detail
I like the plot but the mc, i dont like him at all. He has the intelligence of an ant and doesnt have a centimeter of balls. He forgets to turn on his luck stat and also turn it off. He has an AI guide and he doesnt use her.
Battle of Ascension
HotIce
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I agree, somehow please increase it as he progresses, but not in a forced way. I seen several novels where in the story the MC neglects the value of intelligence or has no common sense. In addition try getting an editor just to fix some of the grammatical errors. Other wise nice novel :D
HotIce:ouch, I will try to upgrade my mc intellegence then :p about AI guide, hmmm some said the mc too dependent to AI guide and here you say the mc didn't use her, getting confused here.
let me remind you. the mc only 3 times activated the hidden stat and 2 times forget to turned off the hidden stat. the first one is when he fighting against his first demonic Rabbit and he almost died. so its normal for me if he is forget. the second is when he is looking for ascension chest and he turned it off. the third is when he opened the ascension chest and after that he drink the essence blood then he twitching all night on the ground because of that. it's normal for me if he forget to turned it off. why you said he is stupid no you said is not stupid but TOO stupid. The mc doesn't come from cultivation or the world that the strong prey weak and also i am not yet tell the mc past when he was in the earth before the Battle of Ascension. but from the early chapter I already told the mc is getting pampered by his parents. This is my reasoning. don't know you can accept it or not. But thanks for read my novel
devilown:how many time mc asked AI about that. that ****** thing for turn on/off. yet mc forget again and again then mc always ask AI about that
HotIce:ouch, I will try to upgrade my mc intellegence then :p about AI guide, hmmm some said the mc too dependent to AI guide and here you say the mc didn't use her, getting confused here.
his stupudity is not just about the luck stat. at lvl 12 with stats that put most lvl 30+ fighters to shame, he went and hunted lvl5 mobs all day only to come to the conclusion, maybe i should fight stronger mobs? Intellingence of an ant? even an ant would know that he could easily hunt lvl 30 mobs. he even defeated somebody over lvl 30 prior to this.
HotIce:let me remind you. the mc only 3 times activated the hidden stat and 2 times forget to turned off the hidden stat. the first one is when he fighting against his first demonic Rabbit and he almost died. so its normal for me if he is forget. the second is when he is looking for ascension chest and he turned it off. the third is when he opened the ascension chest and after that he drink the essence blood then he twitching all night on the ground because of that. it's normal for me if he forget to turned it off. why you said he is stupid no you said is not stupid but TOO stupid. The mc doesn't come from cultivation or the world that the strong prey weak and also i am not yet tell the mc past when he was in the earth before the Battle of Ascension. but from the early chapter I already told the mc is getting pampered by his parents. This is my reasoning. don't know you can accept it or not. But thanks for read my novel
Maybe this is my fault for not explain with detail why he hunt mob with low level. First, our mc is pampered by his parents (read again in the early chap). Second, when the mc reached level 2 in the early chapter, he hunt higher level mob (Which now level 4 Black Wildcat) with his 2 best friends (read again in the early chap). The result? his two best friends died. Third, I still have not tell you about our mc past. If he was soldier in the past or the like, maybe I agree with you to call him stupid but? you know our mc past? not yet. Note: The mc come from the modern world (World without war though there were many gangsters and the like) not cultivation world or the like. Fourth, Also I never said the mc is smart? why would you thought the mc is smart? ANT? maybe Ant will do like what you said because ANT is animal and the mc is human whose has feeling and mind while ANT only has instinct. This my reasoning, don't you can accept it or not? Anyway thanks for read my novel
Roktah:his stupudity is not just about the luck stat. at lvl 12 with stats that put most lvl 30+ fighters to shame, he went and hunted lvl5 mobs all day only to come to the conclusion, maybe i should fight stronger mobs? Intellingence of an ant? even an ant would know that he could easily hunt lvl 30 mobs. he even defeated somebody over lvl 30 prior to this.
Try using leylin from wmw as reference.. Make him think as a researcher/scientist n use ai guide as a portable computer to assist him
HotIce:let me remind you. the mc only 3 times activated the hidden stat and 2 times forget to turned off the hidden stat. the first one is when he fighting against his first demonic Rabbit and he almost died. so its normal for me if he is forget. the second is when he is looking for ascension chest and he turned it off. the third is when he opened the ascension chest and after that he drink the essence blood then he twitching all night on the ground because of that. it's normal for me if he forget to turned it off. why you said he is stupid no you said is not stupid but TOO stupid. The mc doesn't come from cultivation or the world that the strong prey weak and also i am not yet tell the mc past when he was in the earth before the Battle of Ascension. but from the early chapter I already told the mc is getting pampered by his parents. This is my reasoning. don't know you can accept it or not. But thanks for read my novel
You people are looking waaaay too much into this novel. Do you need every single damn detail spelled out for you? Just enjoy the novel and if you don't, leave it. Why bother searching for so many dumb details that don't reeeeaaaally matter?
SwordDeity:If you want OP MC go find BaiSiwa hahahaha
Its better too use ai guide more for your mc privilege, before other char realize ai guide importance.
HotIce:ouch, I will try to upgrade my mc intellegence then :p about AI guide, hmmm some said the mc too dependent to AI guide and here you say the mc didn't use her, getting confused here.
HotIce:ouch, I will try to upgrade my mc intellegence then :p about AI guide, hmmm some said the mc too dependent to AI guide and here you say the mc didn't use her, getting confused here.
