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ilham111x
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Started reading this novel about a month ago and I'm waiting for daily updates now since it's very addictive and definitely worth reading. What i love about this story or should i say what I'm fascinated about the story is that the words used for the description of the characters, mostly the main characters are so descriptive that i could imagine them as if they are real people around me. Not to mention the surroundings are usually detailed very well that i feel like I'm living with the characters sometimes. Lastly but not the least the interaction between the characters whether they are annoying and egoistic, sweet and fluffy, romantic and steamy, violent and angry, it feels real even though the story has a large content based on cultivation and that does not matter at all as the story has been very interesting so far and i could rule out and conclude that this is one of the most quality content i have come across in this genre. Suggestions: I would suggest not to drag the story too much here and there. For example, some characters are not able to explain themselves even when they are aware of the misunderstandings and the consequences they are put through. This brings unnecessary drama which lengthens the story. The story development should bring a steady feeling instead of bringing the feeling as if time stopped. The other thing I would suggest is to avoid giving too much screen time for minor characters as it lengthens the story with less substance in it. Other than that this story is an amazing story that i would recommend everybody to read. Fantastic writing skills and editing. Wish you the best and hopefully I would see some improvements in the near future :D

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Oh. My. Fate?!

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yansusustories
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Awr, thank you for the review! 😊 I'll try to incorporate your suggestions in the revised version and, well, the upcoming chapters in this one 😁

ilham111x
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You are welcome! Honestly i was going to be a little biased and give the sweetest review since this story actually deserves it but that wouldn't help you to further improve or be aware of some improvements you could bring, not that the story is still good as it is but can be better. Thanks for considering my suggestions and i look forward to the improvised chapters :)

yansusustories:Awr, thank you for the review! 😊 I'll try to incorporate your suggestions in the revised version and, well, the upcoming chapters in this one 😁
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Actually, I'm especially happy about the suggestions. Since, well, if nobody tells me what I could improve, it'll be really tough for me to do so at all and I think that improvement is one of the most important things when writing. So thanks again for that! 😊

ilham111x:You are welcome! Honestly i was going to be a little biased and give the sweetest review since this story actually deserves it but that wouldn't help you to further improve or be aware of some improvements you could bring, not that the story is still good as it is but can be better. Thanks for considering my suggestions and i look forward to the improvised chapters :)