Review Detail of Webzayne in Skill System

The story development is alright, character devolpment leaves much to be desired. The main factor that kills this story for me is the grammar or lack there of. The structuring of conversations, and events are made of pure gibberish most of the time, its clear that the author dosent proof read his work, or is just horribly inexperienced when it comes to the English language. Least he could do is use Grammarly or some other spell check.