The story was a bit overwhelming the first few chapters, but once you get used to it, it becomes easier to understand. There are few grammar errors and some awkward word choices, but none that distract you too much from the story. The story pacing is really well done - I could even learn a few pointers from it. It's very engaging and keeps your interest all throughout. Overall it's like a combination of a wuxia novel (the cultivation levels) with anime characters in it. A great read, one that I'll be keeping in my library.
TheVirginPervert
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LIKEHonestly though with your writing, it shows that you're improving. If you compare the early chapters with the latest ones, it's getting better. Keep up the good work! ^^,
TheVirginPervert:Someday I'll be good at English. :'v