Review Detail of khoukharev in Coming back to save the world

The idea is not bad at all. The biggest problem I have with this is writing quality (grammar and such, that's why I only put 3 stars for writing quality). Some sentences are completely incoherent. Author, you really need editor to check and fix your text (it seems you're not native English speaker). I could help, but it's not my native language as well, so you'd better ask/look for someone anyway.