Review Detail of KoFu_ in Coming back to save the world

Grammar 2/5 Surprise surprise, another novel with a good idea only to be a weapon of grammar destruction. Your sentences don't make sense and you don't know how to interconnect conversations. You think that only with "bla bla" the people will understand who the **** is talking. But no, it doesn't help. Not even one bit. Not even that, you don't put descriptions on the dialogues, so most of the time I imagine 2 persons speaking like robots. ALSO!!! Can you PLEASE stop using Chinese additives to names? Nobody understands them and nobody likes them. Updates 4/5 A lot of small chapters to build numbers, not something surprising. But a thing most authors do to gather people. Story 3/5 Cliche after cliche. The school beauty falls in love with him the first time they meet because of a drawing he drew because he liked her smile. ok...wtf dude. Mother/Father believes his son no matter what. And they suddenly gained powers, What effects would make in their life? In their daily lives? In their work? Interaction with friends? No mention of them at all. Best friend and him always talk with the sentence "Bro", makes it confusing as hell to tell which retard is talking to the other. All the precious stones shine and give powers but then they disappear, okay...So far their emerald shines like a lantern all day long with no problem. He decided to tell his "Bro" as soon as his parents and he believes him too. He doesn't even talk to their parents of their course of action like a normal human would do. He clearly said that most people capable of fighting is for the better of the world...Ok, a strategy is a way to fight you know? Is not all about killing and hitting others. Character 2/5 So bland, so immature, so rash. He doesn't behave like an ***** would behave and he's supposed to have lived 2 lives. A goody two shoes delivering power to other side characters with no plan of action what so ever. He behaves like a **** in hormones. Fighting before even thinking. World 5/5 I love the coming back from the future to save the past. And the world is the real world, so no world building.