Item: In Another World with JUST MONIKA
Rating: 5
Author: Zhilbar

ZhilbarLv126yr

2019-02-02 15:03

This may be just a proof of concept for the author, but it's become my favorite of all his works. I see the stuff I'd appreciated before, but the language is cleaner and the writing's fresher- it really looks like he's having fun, as opposed to being weighted down by the vasty majesty of the world he shaped like in something else I love. This is a meal of like 90% sugar, and I've developed a taste for it.

In Another World with JUST MONIKA

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̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ J̴̠͚͉̹̈̀̀ṵ̴̡̧̥̀̈̿ś̷̡̟ẗ̸̡͚̞̘́ ̵̡̿̓̀̃Ṃ̶̢̧̨̡̗͕̱͈̞̫̰̘̺̣̼͈̞̟̤̝̫̮̈͛͜ǫ̵̡̗̹͔̭̼͚͖̯͊̔͋͑̓͒͂͑͋̆͜͠͠ņ̶̡̛̛̦̜̞̮͈͎̭̯̻̟̫̈͂̇̈́͋̆̓͑͐͆͜i̷̡̛̛̫̗̹̮̟̼̩̗̼̯̪̋̃̌̎̅̽͛͋̏̂̍̂́̆̆̂̀̓͆͝͝k̷͙̝̙̩̀͑̍͊́̋̒̊̀͆͌͒͌̚͝a̸̢̛̖͙͓̝̥̣̻̜͛͋͑̈͆͆́͒̔̓̍͘̕͝͠͝͠ͅ JUST MONIKA

6yr

NotSomeoneLv4

Excuse me is this a new religion? *Joins* JustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonikaJustMonika

6yr

nutakugamerzLv5

great...!!! but just questioning does this have aaaaaaaa piak piak piak moments you know when two bodies collides again and again .in a very good way @(^Π^)@

6yr

RadoslawLv5

Monika is love Monika is life. If someone says otherwise he is heretic and needs to be purged only the true beliefs will survive and we all will live in better world where there is only Monika.

6yr

beast_regardsLv3

An attempt to a fix otherwise bad anime - an successful attempt if I may add. Self-insert protagonist now have actual personality, which is quite an achievement considering how boring and interchangeable most anime protagonists are by default. It's worth to give it five stars for just that. Otherwise, it pretty much follows the original story, it just improves characters interaction. And nerfs protagonist a little bit, probably in attempt to make him less of a Gary Stu. And it is actual crossover for some reason too - even though Monika doesn't play that much of the role other than being an sentient power behind the protagonist's awesomeness. While she seemed important at first, she was pushed into the background for sake of having more girls in the harem for no obvious reasons. And harem is not even that important - it's not like story will do anything with a harem part. Still a good story overall though, and seems to be well written too, so I certainly recommend to give it a try

6yr

topakLv14

Not liking it,nerfed version of original mc with annoying side kick(sp),bland jokes got bored reading it,............................................. .. .

6yr

DragoShadeheartLv4

Great story. One of the greatest stories I have seen on here over the course of the Several YEARS I have spent going through HUNDREDS if not THOUSANDS of stories. This story is one I will always be looking forward to reading the next chapter of even if I have to wait a few years for it. The story is worth it.

4yr

TonyorobskyLv13

The things that make this fanfic better than the original are: 1- the depth of the characters (even secondary ones). 2- the smartphone being more than just a convinient tool. The things that I both like, and yet find annoying due to overuse: 1- comedy relying on chuuni and animes meme 2- use of dark background to give the protagonist more depth, leading to brooding

5yr

DarkImmortal_IntelLv14

Oh... my...god... Out of all the fan fics I've read (to date), this is the number 1 comedy fan fic I've ever freakin read in my gawd dahm fuqing life... To all those who are reading this review to gauge if this LN is any good... FUQING STOP READING THIS COMMENT AND READ THE DAHM LN! The author is professional grade. I would give you 1 million dollars and lock him in a god dahm dark room and force to write me golden pages for my entire life (if I could).

6yr

DjabilongLv6

A little bit of Monika in my life A little bit of Monika by my side A little bit of Monika is all I need A little bit of Monika is what I see A little bit of Monika in the sun A little bit of Monika all night long A little bit of Monika, here I am A little bit of you makes me your man

3yr

Multiverse Gacha

If you like this fanfiction, you will definitely like our other fanfiction, so feel free to visit our profile to read our new fanfiction: [Bleach: Love and Bonds Make Me Stronger] --- Waking up in a mysterious world, August finds himself grappling with the dilemma of whether he can survive in a seemingly beautiful yet deeply dark world. Fortunately, leveraging the luck of his nine generations, he manages to obtain the Gate of Babylon belonging to a certain goldenman... With the Gate of Babylon in his pocket, August decides to amass all the treasures available in the world. However, once again, he faces a dilemma... Are girls also treasures? Can he keep them in his Gate of Babylon?

XElenea · Anime & Comics

4.1

469 Chs

Naruto: Uchiha Rejects Konoha

Traveling through the Hokage world and becoming a member of the Uchiha, Yagami had no choice but to pull the family away from Konoha to avoid becoming the soul of Itachi's sword on the night of the genocide. Konoha crowding us Uchiha out? Sorry, I won’t play with you anymore. Whoever wants to go to the Police Department, go ahead! Konoha doesn’t want us Uchiha in power? We don’t want to fight yet! Isn’t Sharingan-fried eggs delicious? A war broke out? None of my business, Uchiha! We eat our own and live on our own. We don’t use Konoha’s funds, we don’t bask in Konoha’s light, and we’re not included when you fight for power or for war. You’re so beautiful!

GregariousLion · Anime & Comics

4.2

146 Chs

In DxD with Sign-In System!

Transmigrated into DxD World—Kuoh Town, Hibari Kyoya. an average student, spent 18 agonizing years in the world fully aware of the dangers, knowing he is utterly powerless in a world of gods and monsters, Until... [Ding! Sign-In System loading… 20%… 50%… 80%… 100%.] Destiny, it seems.. has a cruel sense of humor. A [Sign-In System], long overdue, finally bursts to life within him, offering a chance at survival, a chance at power... [Ding! Congratulations! You have received the Rainbow-Grade Gift Bag!] ... He then started completing System's tasks, accumulating even greater rewards. [Ding! Task completed. Reward: Perfect Rumble-Rumble Fruit (Weakness to water Removed).] [Ding! Task completed. Congratulations to the host for obtaining the Flying Thunder God Technique!]

DragonnX · Anime & Comics

4.6

99 Chs

Being Vegito after defusion

So... I am Vegito. This is the most bizarre situation in my entire existence. Somehow as Goku and Vegeta fused their souls energy that should have created another soul instead called mine - and fused with me. I now have all the memories of the two mightiest warriors in the universe - though thankfully none of their feelings. Those memories being with Bulma and Chichi are awkward enough... I suppose its time to defeat Buu and ask Shenron to seperate their souls from my body and give them bodies of their own.

Samael_Son_of_Dawn · Anime & Comics

4.3

32 Chs

X-Force: Beyond Omega

Aron died in an underground fight arena, only to wake up in Marvel World with an OP power similar to All For One. But in this world, he is a clone, saved by the X-Men. Follow, Aron's new journey as he tries his best to fit in this world of endless chaos. The biggest question is if he is a clone then where's the original body? [Timeline: AU] [Harem> So, please, if you aren't into it, don't read.] ...[The cover picture is AI made]...[This is not a translation.] Support link: pat eon.com/UnknownMaster [15+ advance chs] [No double billing] ----------- DON'T TRANSLATE OR MAKE AUDIOBOOK OF THIS BOOK

UnknownMaster · Anime & Comics

4.7

127 Chs

DxD: I Steal Luck

"In a twist of fate, Blake finds himself reincarnated into the world of High School DxD, a universe brimming with angels, demons, and supernatural forces. Gifted with the power to plunder luck and travel across worlds, Blake is determined to forge a destiny of unmatched power, endless wealth, and a harem of breathtakingly beautiful women. As he navigates a path filled with powerful allies, fearsome enemies, and thrilling adventures, Blake must uncover his true potential. Will he rise above the challenges and become a legend, or will the lurking darkness claim him?" Ding! "Host has successfully integrated into this world. Activating the Luck Plunder System..." 1%... 36%... 78%... 99%... 100%! Support link: pat reon.com/RioRaRyu [10+ advance chs] ----------- Copyright disclaimer: I do NOT own anime nor any character or works featured in the fan-fiction. No copyright infringement intended.

RioRaRyu · Anime & Comics

3.6

146 Chs

Mash-up Anime World: Creating the SCP Foundation to Contain Anomalies

Takamine Haruto transmigrated into a crossover anime world. His childhood friend is Eriri, his deskmate is Yukinoshita, the school beauty next door is Kaguya, and his new neighbor is Gabriel. He originally thought he could enjoy a peaceful life in this slice-of-life anime setting! But then—he stepped outside and found the Female Titan, Annie. Around the corner, he ran into the gluttonous Kamishiro Rize. A concrete statue that twists people's necks the moment they look away? A shy entity that hunts you to the ends of the earth if you make eye contact? An immortal lizard that adapts to any environment and continuously evolves? Takamine Haruto was overwhelmed. To maintain his peaceful daily life, he established the SCP Foundation to contain anomalies from across the multiverse! Note: This is a translation (Raw: 人在综漫：打造基金会，收容万界) Advance Chapters Here: p@treon.c0m/VenerableZayUnderHeaven Join Responsibly

VenerableZay · Anime & Comics

4.7

213 Chs

From Overlord To Multiverse.

Lioro blankly looked at the game-like screen in front of him. It seems he has traversed to Overlord world with a Yggdrasil like game template! [Ding! Congratulations on getting the special profession 'Dimensional Traveler'] "......" Can it take me home? ------ Epic powers check, Epic side characters check, Epic fights check, Epic Romance also check! so what are you waiting for?!?! Read now! ------ Worlds I plan to travel to: Danmachi(Ongoing), Demon Slayer(Ongoing), Frozen(Ongoing), Konosuba, Elden RIng, etc. ------- Uncomfirmed Love Interests(Doesn't mean they have been wifed, the process is ongoing and is subjected to change under certain circumstances.) 1) Hestia. 2) Elsa.( yes frozen).

nkcthereaper · Anime & Comics

4.6

56 Chs