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I know that shocking truth!! As Mai was buried under the earthly soil something came to her mind like a rumbling thunder that could pierce through her mind. She realized I who has been taught to be a sacrifice ever since young was buried alive as a sacrifice for earth and not heaven. Then a chilling thought came to her as if the devil himself whisper to ears, telling her that she would be in the netherworld and not heaven. “I’m an pretty sure that is truth hehehe sounds about it right?”

Winter's Chill: She Wept in Sorrow

Leialeial

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Leialeial
LeialeialAuthorLeialeial

Lol, you're close! What do you think of the start so far?

Crystal_Aris
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Love the start!!!! Also I’m in love with the voice!!!!! I wouldn’t mind him as a devil! He’s been there for her!

Leialeial:Lol, you're close! What do you think of the start so far?
Leialeial
LeialeialAuthorLeialeial

He's not the devil! Try again. :P

Crystal_Aris:Love the start!!!! Also I’m in love with the voice!!!!! I wouldn’t mind him as a devil! He’s been there for her!
Crystal_Aris
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I was just saying I wouldn’t mind if he was, though I was wondering if he was a spirit, since he ‘checks’ things out for her

Leialeial:He's not the devil! Try again. :P