Review Detail of DeJeL in Winter's Chill: She Wept in Sorrow

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters.* Constructive Criticism: I would like to see a bit more of the structure of her current world... also, the first two chapters felt very slow when I was reading them though you came in with a good story shortly thereafter... I don't know a way to correct this if it can be, but I do suggest that you ask people to read at least 3 chapters before deciding whether or not to read your book, for it does take that long to be clear if one would like the story or not.;,;. Positive Feedback: Very good character development and decently clear plot and world design. Personal Feedback: At first I thought that this novel was going to be prosaic, however, after reading all the way to chapter five, I actually found it to be very alluring. I did not want to stop, but I have other stories to both review and to catch up to, so, for now, I have to (metaphorically) put the book down. I will pick it back up when I am able.;,;.