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Review Detail of in VRMMORPG: Divine Luck

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Lv32yr

I Would Say That The Story Development Of This Novel Is Terrible. Everything That Either Happened To Nivra or His Actions Seem Really Forced Which I Can Tell When I Read The First Two Chapters Of This Novel. Though, I Did Only Read Two Chapters Though But I Can Tell That The Story Would Develop In A Way Related To Luck. Why Would I Say That The Story Development Is Terrible and Seemed Forced? From The First Chapter, It Seemed Forced Because He Just Saw An Ad About The VRMMO Itself And The Game Was Just Literally Delivered A While Later Without Even Any Preparations From Nivra Whatsoever. Then During The Character Creation, All His Actions Lack Reasoning. He Doesn't Have A Good Background Which Complemented The Fact That The Story Development Seemed Forced. Overall, The Story Development Lacks Reasoning Behind Every Action Which What I'm Complaining About. I Mean Other Novels With The Same Genre I Read Has Reasoning Behind Every Story Development.

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VRMMORPG: Divine Luck

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