Review Detail of 4DRookie in IMMORTAL'S CODE

Item: IMMORTAL'S CODE
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

4DRookieAuthor5yr4DRookie

Hello, Author here. Thank you for giving your time to read this novel. This is my first novel and I hope all of you enjoy reading it and make it a success. I will try my best to make this novel memorable one for all the readers. Thank you.

IMMORTAL'S CODE

4DRookie

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YoshiLv12Yoshi

Without tryin to be mean: either have a friend of yours (who can speak-use english properly) help u with the edits or try to learn more. Also you are too direct to your explanations feels kinda wrong for a novel..nevertheless wish you all the best.

5yr

FriendlessLv4Friendless

This is just my opinion, but i feel that your synopsis is lacking. Take this with a grain of salt because I am not too experienced, but it feels a bit short

5yr

SymmetrovalLv4Symmetroval

This sounds interesting but as the other said, something is lacking.. but i know you can pull it up, i'll be expecting a lot from a fellow original creator! Good luck to us! ^_^

5yr