Not_ImpressedLv56yr

2018-09-27 01:03

I didn't plan on writing a review but I got really mad seeing the score this novel has so here we go. (`A´) - - Writing Quality - The quality is (O▽O)d . The text is well structured, it's separated into paragraphs so we don't have to struggle with a wall of text -- as compared to some "5 star" fan fictions with horrifying grammar. Stability of Updates - I usually check for updates at an interval of 2-3 days? //'cause I hate reading only one chapter and having to wait// So I can't really comment on this, but I believe that the author isn't the kind to keep us waiting unless something serious happens in rl. (＾▽＾)/ Story Development - I consider it to be not too fast and not too slow, it's steady paced, at least that's how I see it . Although there are misunderstandings between the novel's characters they aren't dragged on for long so the frustration over them doesn't built up. (´꒳`;) - - unlike some other novels that shall not be named. Character Design - First of all I gotta say I absolutely love you for not going with the usual cold, possessive and obsessive gong/seme. I had to drop some bl's just because the gong didn't do anything else other than restricting the shou's liberty and flying airplanes/batting one out/mating like bunnies all day, more times than not without the shou's consent. (ಥ﹏ಥ) Both the Nie Chang and Su Yan are likable characters. The way Su Yan acts after they get together is absolutely adorable, I like the fact that he isn't all tense around Ah Chang as opposed to how the mainstream shous are around the gong. Ah Chang actually waits for Su Yan to be ready to go to a further stage in their relationship and that's what a healthy relationship is supposed to be like. _(:3」∠)_ World Background - We're told what we need to know about the character's background, there is no useless information dump here. I don't think the world background is that important here and we don't really need to know more about it as the story is set in the modern world. I don't think we need more information about the Heaven Corporation as all that we need to know about it has been said. I'm not going to talk about the system, go read it and find out more on your own. 〜(꒪꒳꒪)/ So to finish this off, the novel is definitely worth a read and I wish there could be an option for the authors to report a review and get it removed when it doesn't give any actual information about it. - - The following text is unnecessary but I really wanted to talk about this : The only reason this has a score of 4.1 is because of three idiots, let's call them 1, 2 and 3. 1 - Rated this 1 star and questioned if the site is trying to "turn him gay"- Yes, that's how it works. That was the plan all along. ( ͡ᵔ ͜ʖ ͡ᵔ ) 2 - The novel apparently didn't have stable updates at some point and they gave it 1 star, didn't bother to delete the review afterwards. 3 - Actually accused the author of using "code words", it's called abbreviation honey (◕‿◕✿) I also gotta quote "May you all fry in hell"- - Thank you, just because you said that we will all turn into chicken nuggets and fries in hell. Yes. - - Anyway thank you author for writing this. I really enjoy reading it. 〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜

Lovely Writing System

yansusustories

4.5

328 Chs