Review Detail of TigerBlooImmortal in Heavenly Sword Clan
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I know this might be early(more like very early) I like the concept and what to encourage the author to continue, also I would like if you can add romance like1-4 women(anymore would be to much) and make him op but subtly op, give his family some type of inheritance like soul swords that at every family member gains from the use of the Manuel then after some generations it becomes a bloodline thing changing their constitutions.just my suggestions, won't affect my opinion of the story so keep up
Heavenly Sword Clan
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Thank you tiger, hmm well I have the second chapter ready but my little sister wants to read it first before i publish it, don't worry about the inheritance it's OP. And about romance, there will definitely be some but not at the beginning. The MC was a peak immortal normal girls won't get in his eyes.
sleepteddy:Thank you tiger, hmm well I have the second chapter ready but my little sister wants to read it first before i publish it, don't worry about the inheritance it's OP. And about romance, there will definitely be some but not at the beginning. The MC was a peak immortal normal girls won't get in his eyes.
Hypnosxs:1-4 wifes?? plzz nooo make it 1 lover, or he can be be ******* who does only onenightstands xd
Hypnosxs:1-4 wifes?? plzz nooo make it 1 lover, or he can be be ******* who does only onenightstands xd
While we're making requests about the book could you give him a cute pet that turns into a ferocious beast...wait, that sounds like something a little girl would ask for...Give him an eye technique that makes lower level opponents change into talking pigs! That way when they get scared they can go weee wee wee all the way home. No, that sounds dumb...You know what, you're the writer do whatever you want. I think you're doing a pretty good job already. I'm really excited about the idea of him creating a OP clan!
I’d say limit it to 2 more then that is just asking for trouble as balancing an satisfying both can be hard of course the relationship will be in light n both know each other n not hidden but still lol
Hypnosxs:1-4 wifes?? plzz nooo make it 1 lover, or he can be be ******* who does only onenightstands xd
