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thePooh_Bear
thePooh_BearLv56yr
2018-09-26 06:12

I give this a 5 star because this novel is truly written magnificently. The plotline is beautiful and the characters are very unique. However, I do want to point out that there are issues with the grammar. But regardless, I still think that this is worth 5 stars despite the mistakes.

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Sorahana
SorahanaAuthor

Thank you for the review ^_^ I will do my best to correct the grammar.

madylene
madyleneLv2

Beautiful character i like the issues is a very good characters have big potiencial comics our movie it's desame i like written character interesting good job

Marjor3e
Marjor3eLv11

Try something new and unique - The King's Beloved - i recommend it if you like romance fiction, totally not a cliche story

Lisanne
LisanneLv4

Yes, it is.

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