Review Detail of Brian371 in The Tiger Within
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I dont understand Theres to many characters to my small brain And is clovis already have a child And the fl have a lover So whats the story is about??? The fl being a contracted beast of The (married and have kids) crown prince clovis so thats means hes dirty and now hes with fl And fl has a secret Buts all and all its great u can make a story Even i cant make a 3 paragraph story Its take an 1 hour on my test of "the little sampaguita" And me lazing around hitting my head to have an idiea of what to write
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I can understand where your comeing from and i thank you for the feed back. I am a slightly complex storyline. However some of your issues i can adress. The female lead does not technically have a lover, she has a love interest. Though they are close they are not a item. It will play into the plot firther along. Clovis is not married His wife has died, and the child... well everyone belives the child is the former wifes. He is not considered dirty in a world where having more than one wife is fine. Thanks for the feedback hope that helped (maybe)