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Review Detail of ThyUnknownSaint in Blue Star Cultivator

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ThyUnknownSaint
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I could withstand the inconsistencies and grammar errors. But the level of absurdity made me drop this. I don’t understand how someone who’s left the materialistic world could do something so stupid? Despite his age, his mentality is that of a child incapable of understanding. I find it hard to believe that he tolerated with a dirty whore who let a women who pleased a fatty seuxally, ‘touched’ him like that.. It just shows the Writer doesn’t really care about this story...! He should be capable of knowing right from wrong, don’t give me that bullsh*t of being raised in the forest

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Blue Star Cultivator

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amazingfabs
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Thanks for your critique and for reading. As a fan of the genre who has read countless chapters before I decided to try my hand at writing some ******* stuff. I was trying not to portray an overly self righteous mc, to be honest, I was sick to death of the characters that does the "right thing" all the time. Obviously its not to your liking, I was going for shock factor. lol. that back fired. Thanks anyway