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First time reading an original story and i must say i'm so disappointed the story is force especially the part where he came back from the lou clan under the reason of gaining info to the where he stand in the world. The author could have done better than forcing the storyto revolve around the mc and the lou clan, another thing about the story that irritate me so much the way the author is making a romance without developing the story itself we only see that Ruo girl whatever her name is for aboout 2 to 3 chaptera yet the mc starting to feel something to her. As for the mc he acts way to passive and less wary of the lou clan it's like he didn't suffer to bullying and got thrown into mountain no it's far from that he is acting like a dog being acknowledged by his owner for the first time. The writting isn't needs a little fix to it the story on the other hand is too force no foundation on it the first chapter is like reading a fanfiction with a cliche writting style of pretty much just the mc recalling the events thqt lead him to the mountain. Over all review "Poor" is an understatement.

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