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Erosire
ErosireLv55yr
2019-04-16 10:07

MC becoming godlike and emotionless really fast. The writting and the translation is horrondous to get through. Better to read something else !!!!!

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Celestial
CelestialLv5

"The writting and the translation is horrondous to get through" with your writing skills and lack of an ability to spell you sure are qualified to make that statement, anyway I found the fact the the MC got dumped multiple times because he was perfect yet unreliable like a flickering fantasy is rather astounding considering that the author is probably rather small-time, anyway your criticism doesn't have genuine criticism, it just what you feel, and sometimes that's enough but, you're supposed to tell people which part you don't like and why, and how AS WELL as what you feel, I know you're thinking that I'm an asshole and a jerk but, I hope you understand.

AGenericName
AGenericNameLv4

At least he has more to say compared to people who post only emojis and give it a 5 star.

Celestial:"The writting and the translation is horrondous to get through" with your writing skills and lack of an ability to spell you sure are qualified to make that statement, anyway I found the fact the the MC got dumped multiple times because he was perfect yet unreliable like a flickering fantasy is rather astounding considering that the author is probably rather small-time, anyway your criticism doesn't have genuine criticism, it just what you feel, and sometimes that's enough but, you're supposed to tell people which part you don't like and why, and how AS WELL as what you feel, I know you're thinking that I'm an asshole and a jerk but, I hope you understand.
MrRagHand
MrRagHandLv15

If I may, Celestial, your own lack of comprehensive wording is pretty painful as well... you don’t seem to have the qualifications to question someone else’s grammar. Also, this novel is really lame...

Celestial:"The writting and the translation is horrondous to get through" with your writing skills and lack of an ability to spell you sure are qualified to make that statement, anyway I found the fact the the MC got dumped multiple times because he was perfect yet unreliable like a flickering fantasy is rather astounding considering that the author is probably rather small-time, anyway your criticism doesn't have genuine criticism, it just what you feel, and sometimes that's enough but, you're supposed to tell people which part you don't like and why, and how AS WELL as what you feel, I know you're thinking that I'm an asshole and a jerk but, I hope you understand.
Celestial
CelestialLv5

Ah sorry sir, it appeared you have cleared your spelling? Also I'm sorry, I shouldn't have forced preference. It was quite hypocritical but, what actually tick my button wrong was because it appeared that I saw more 'comments' on a 'review' channel, your 'review' wasn't going to give a clear image of the story and I was somewhat frustrated because of so. There are many who leaves 'comments' on the 'review' section besides you but, I don't have time for all of them, in my eyes a review is extremely important for it helps other people to understand the story prior to reading.

MrRagHand:If I may, Celestial, your own lack of comprehensive wording is pretty painful as well... you don’t seem to have the qualifications to question someone else’s grammar. Also, this novel is really lame...
Celestial
CelestialLv5

Ahh, I've just realised you're not the original poster.

MrRagHand:If I may, Celestial, your own lack of comprehensive wording is pretty painful as well... you don’t seem to have the qualifications to question someone else’s grammar. Also, this novel is really lame...
Celestial
CelestialLv5

Ahh, I've just realised you're not the original poster.

MrRagHand:If I may, Celestial, your own lack of comprehensive wording is pretty painful as well... you don’t seem to have the qualifications to question someone else’s grammar. Also, this novel is really lame...
Celestial
CelestialLv5

Also I did not question his grammar but, I did question his spelling.

MrRagHand:If I may, Celestial, your own lack of comprehensive wording is pretty painful as well... you don’t seem to have the qualifications to question someone else’s grammar. Also, this novel is really lame...
Burn_To_Ash
Burn_To_AshLv11

I have yet to see a Chinese novel, having pure romance (Male). In cultivation novels, they say they must focus on cultivation rather than romance, in this novel, MC becomes a male prostitute without emotions. I'm starting to think there is something wrong with the peoples in China.

Burn_To_Ash
Burn_To_AshLv11

I have yet to see a Chinese novel, having pure romance (Male). In cultivation novels, they say they must focus on cultivation rather than romance, in this novel, MC becomes a male prostitute without emotions. I'm starting to think there is something wrong with the peoples in China.

ToSuckmyBalls
ToSuckmyBallsLv4

You're just one more asshole crying because someone gave a negative rating to your favorite romance. Is it fanboy syndrome that calls?

Celestial:"The writting and the translation is horrondous to get through" with your writing skills and lack of an ability to spell you sure are qualified to make that statement, anyway I found the fact the the MC got dumped multiple times because he was perfect yet unreliable like a flickering fantasy is rather astounding considering that the author is probably rather small-time, anyway your criticism doesn't have genuine criticism, it just what you feel, and sometimes that's enough but, you're supposed to tell people which part you don't like and why, and how AS WELL as what you feel, I know you're thinking that I'm an asshole and a jerk but, I hope you understand.
ToSuckmyBalls
ToSuckmyBallsLv4

I did not see your comment in the review of our friend asmita19 "😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘"

Celestial:"The writting and the translation is horrondous to get through" with your writing skills and lack of an ability to spell you sure are qualified to make that statement, anyway I found the fact the the MC got dumped multiple times because he was perfect yet unreliable like a flickering fantasy is rather astounding considering that the author is probably rather small-time, anyway your criticism doesn't have genuine criticism, it just what you feel, and sometimes that's enough but, you're supposed to tell people which part you don't like and why, and how AS WELL as what you feel, I know you're thinking that I'm an asshole and a jerk but, I hope you understand.
ToSuckmyBalls
ToSuckmyBallsLv4

Or in the review of our friend Pallu10 "✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️😊😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊 "I wonder, is there any spelling mistake in these emojis?

Celestial:"The writting and the translation is horrondous to get through" with your writing skills and lack of an ability to spell you sure are qualified to make that statement, anyway I found the fact the the MC got dumped multiple times because he was perfect yet unreliable like a flickering fantasy is rather astounding considering that the author is probably rather small-time, anyway your criticism doesn't have genuine criticism, it just what you feel, and sometimes that's enough but, you're supposed to tell people which part you don't like and why, and how AS WELL as what you feel, I know you're thinking that I'm an asshole and a jerk but, I hope you understand.
ToSuckmyBalls
ToSuckmyBallsLv4

I forgot to mention the beautiful review of our friend Diosha who gave 5 stars and wrote this: "The story is nice and lloking forward for more... More moreore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moreMore moreore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more"

Celestial:"The writting and the translation is horrondous to get through" with your writing skills and lack of an ability to spell you sure are qualified to make that statement, anyway I found the fact the the MC got dumped multiple times because he was perfect yet unreliable like a flickering fantasy is rather astounding considering that the author is probably rather small-time, anyway your criticism doesn't have genuine criticism, it just what you feel, and sometimes that's enough but, you're supposed to tell people which part you don't like and why, and how AS WELL as what you feel, I know you're thinking that I'm an asshole and a jerk but, I hope you understand.
ToSuckmyBalls
ToSuckmyBallsLv4

If there is any mistake in what I wrote, I hope you, great knight of justice, paladin of spelling, and king of the reviewers, please forgive me

Celestial:Also I did not question his grammar but, I did question his spelling.
Celestial
CelestialLv5

Oh please,I'm flattered but, no I stand by what I think except for the spelling thing and also the pushing my preference part.

ToSuckmyBalls:If there is any mistake in what I wrote, I hope you, great knight of justice, paladin of spelling, and king of the reviewers, please forgive me
Celestial
CelestialLv5

Like I said in one of my previous reply to the kind sir raghand that you aren't the only one and I also didn't have the time to reply to every single pointless review you're just unlucky,sorry I guess,I'll own up to your criticism and sarcasm.

ToSuckmyBalls:I forgot to mention the beautiful review of our friend Diosha who gave 5 stars and wrote this: "The story is nice and lloking forward for more... More moreore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moreMore moreore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more"
Celestial
CelestialLv5

Thank you for archiving every pointless review it must've taken a lot of your free time I'm sincerely flattered.

ToSuckmyBalls:Or in the review of our friend Pallu10 "✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️😊😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊 "I wonder, is there any spelling mistake in these emojis?
Celestial
CelestialLv5

Yeah, let's hope I also have the same free time as you so that one day I can ***** about other people,yeah no let's hope that day'll never come at that point I'm just a degenerate.

ToSuckmyBalls:I did not see your comment in the review of our friend asmita19 "😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘"
Celestial
CelestialLv5

Also no I'm not saying you're the degenerate, I'm self conscious about my rather offensive comment.

ToSuckmyBalls:I did not see your comment in the review of our friend asmita19 "😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘"
Daoist903209
Daoist903209Lv2

Yeah

AGenericName:At least he has more to say compared to people who post only emojis and give it a 5 star.
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