Review Detail of Noxvae in Lord of Hell

I find this novel really great, even if I agree it'd need some editing. The story is original, as the MC is the Lord of Hell, and the development of the story is quite fast and full of surprises (for example the Stairs of Death's chapter in which Yama didn't break the record but the Stairs itself). You don't get bored and discover new and interesting things in each new chapter, what makes me like this novel a lot. Unfortunately, as I said, it would really need some editing as the ponctuation is a bit missing with really long sentences and there are some words or missing or not the most suited in some sentences. Having a followed release schedule would be better too, even if it is one chapter per week without the readers knowing the exact day, because we know at least whe there'll be a new one, and we don't check randomly. I hope there'll be a lot more readers in the future as this is one of my favourite novels.