I can't believe the amount of paid fake reviews on this. The story has obviously never been checked for grammar mistakes and honestly seems like the work of a middle school student's rough draft than anything else. The plot is super over used and cliched and not even well done at that, the only "twist" is that you have a cringey edge lord of a main character who is the actual KING OF HELL, but is mentally immature. So much poorly written side character monologues whose only purpose is to shove in our face how the MC is trash every other line and to beef up the word count with dry and painfully bad dialogue. This seems like it was a 6th grader's bad first attempt of writing a fanfic after reading too many and just trying to smash together a bunch of cliche regardless of if it fits or not.
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