Review Detail of BedlessSleeper in Lord of Hell
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The reviews here are almost certainly 100% fake. I can't believe some people are saying that this novel has 'better grammar' or 'show, don't tell' when first of all, the bloody SYNOPSIS is completely grammatically incorrect, and secondly, the first and second chapters word count is literally 30% of the dialogue. Not just normal dialogue, but an entire BLOCK of dialogue, no stopping, no thoughts in between, but its an entire BLOCK of just talking to either themselves or to some other dude. I've seen authors just bombing us with world building or describing a scene in a massive chunk of text, but I've never seen a wall of dialogue like this before. Oh ye, did I mention it was entirely in caps? Prob forgot to toggle off the caps lock... Don't bother reading, for something that Qidian advertised, it's horrible...
Lord of Hell
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I'll say here, that I don't believe myself to be fake. I like the concept and the story. I normally don't care about technicalities such as text wall, so that's got nothing to do with me. Grammer as well, I've read far worse so it's no big deal. And the Author normally fixed them after I pointed out the issues. Besides the several weeks gap of updates, the story isn't all that bad.
