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ajhiscoming
ajhiscomingLv56yr
2018-05-22 13:46

So far it has a great start for a future greater story. The MC is a very unique take on a real mythical god and while it hasn't gone far enough to make judgments on the world of the story at large or the specifics of the MC's motivations/feelings, the tidbits that are in the chapters so far speak of a slow build up to a great world that'll suck you in rather quickly and make you never wanna put it down. You may even re-read the chapters hoping for the author to release another chapter sooner so you can get your fix. I'll probably be there right with you to join the F5 army.

Lord of Hell

Lord_of_Hell
4.1
54 Chs

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Disharmonious
DisharmoniousLv5

An impressive and original novel where the MC is not some random kid with the memories or legacie of a great being but rather the Lord of Hell himself. The strory seems currently fast paced wich is a +, and not much focus has been placed on the cultivation letting place to the OPness of the MC (retain some of his former power + full authority on demons/devils + thousands years of war and punishement=OP) A great point is that he is still Yama and not Ye Ji.

6yr

BedlessSleeper
BedlessSleeperLv10

The reviews here are almost certainly 100% fake. I can't believe some people are saying that this novel has 'better grammar' or 'show, don't tell' when first of all, the bloody SYNOPSIS is completely grammatically incorrect, and secondly, the first and second chapters word count is literally 30% of the dialogue. Not just normal dialogue, but an entire BLOCK of dialogue, no stopping, no thoughts in between, but its an entire BLOCK of just talking to either themselves or to some other dude. I've seen authors just bombing us with world building or describing a scene in a massive chunk of text, but I've never seen a wall of dialogue like this before. Oh ye, did I mention it was entirely in caps? Prob forgot to toggle off the caps lock... Don't bother reading, for something that Qidian advertised, it's horrible...

6yr
RandomNameGoesHere
RandomNameGoesHereLv6

Reveal spoiler

6yr
agiletick
agiletickLv5

Great and interesting story.it has a original plot and world building so far and i hope you do not stop it half way. **. not a fake review. pss. I need more chapters!

6yr
1supreme
1supremeLv3

I gave my stones to yama....superb story...cant wait fr nxt chap.....................................................................................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

6yr
arx1972
arx1972Lv5

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Fear_Vector
Fear_VectorLv10

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Fisk_Rush
Fisk_RushLv6

good like the character and when yama tells the teacher but the teacher do not belive he the story development kinda of need a update to make to be good

6yr
Noxvae
NoxvaeLv4

I saw a review about fake ones and I can assure that mine isn't. I follow this story and I give it my power stones because I think it deserves them. So okay, I've seen better grammar and presentation (I find it's getting better as the story goes on), and the updates are kind of... sporadic... but the story is really original with a great main character and just what it takes of fun and badass moments to make it worth reading. I really encourage starting reading it, so you can make your own opinion about it and, hopefully, like it and share this amazing and addictive story with others. Thanks for reading !

6yr
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