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Nier_Xue
Nier_XueLv56yr
2018-10-04 06:51

He got a system just to become K pop idol? What a waste............... The story.. Well, its like watching trailer rather then the movie itself.. Extramly fast paced... Fast pace is an art itself.. But you need experience to pull it off.. I might be quite harsh, but author goes on like handsome this and handsome that.. Well, are korean girls only judge boys with looks? Nothing else? Heh.. Well its the attitude that counts the most... Rather then the look.... I know it might be hard writing little believable novel.. But the way these characters react feels kinda stuffy.. You know? Like ahh god.. Just read the story you will know.. Would gave 3.5 or 4 star if chapter realease was frequent.. Anyway.. Author keep trying.. I will still read it..

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No problem, some of it is totally true It isn't really a novel that I intented to write very deeply about. A lot of people like the fast pace, and the real story begins in volume 2, the new volume. My writing has gotten better in quality compared to the past, but I decided to stick to the same concept because that's what the novel basically is. If you want to read a better written novel, read my other one :)

Nier_Xue
Nier_XueLv5

Yea.. Vampire.. Yea.. Will give it a try..

Maxime:No problem, some of it is totally true It isn't really a novel that I intented to write very deeply about. A lot of people like the fast pace, and the real story begins in volume 2, the new volume. My writing has gotten better in quality compared to the past, but I decided to stick to the same concept because that's what the novel basically is. If you want to read a better written novel, read my other one :)
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