not much of a spoiler, but will repeat lots of things to get to 500-word count, so bear with me. Thanks. overall a great fan-version of harry p0tter, I like that the MC is not OP from the beginning, nor does he have a significant knowledge about the world of harry potter, however, uses his brain to try and decipher the actions which have taken place, may take place and slowly piece together clues to some outcome. Good paragraph spacing and world creation, the author did not rely heavily on stats to make each chapter longer as filler, instead incorporating different points of views of each character. Great job! In my opinion, at this point it feels like either reading or watching the series, with some twists that MC-Milo has tried to uncover before the occurrence, however, he lacks the societal knowledge to explain his thinking without making it seem like he is non-comprehensible. perhaps in the future, someone will be able to find the link between his origins from a PC in the Harry P0tter world, and possibly make the MC a bit smarter ( i mean in a way that he can memorize spells from both is original world, and the world he has been transported to) looking forward to more chapters and please continue with the great work you are doing! * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * from this for ward it is going to repeat until i got 500 word count! not much of a spoiler, but will repeat lots of things to get to 500-word count, so bear with me. Thanks. overall a great fan-version of harry p0tter, I like that the MC is not OP from the beginning, nor does he have a significant knowledge about the world of harry potter, however, uses his brain to try and decipher the actions which have taken place, may take place and slowly piece together clues to some outcome. Good paragraph spacing and world creation, the author did not rely heavily on stats to make each chapter longer as filler, instead incorporating different points of views of each character. Great job! In my opinion, at this point it feels like either reading or watching the series, with some twists that MC-Milo has tried to uncover before the occurrence, however, he lacks the societal knowledge to explain his thinking without making it seem like he is non-comprehensible. perhaps in the future, someone will be able to find the link between his origins from a PC in the Harry P0tter world, and possibly make the MC a bit smarter ( i mean in a way that he can memorize spells from both is original world, and the world he has been transported to) looking forward to more chapters and please continue with the great work you are doing! not much of a spoiler, but will repeat lots of things to get to 500-word count, so bear with me. Thanks. overall a great fan-version of harry p0tter, I like that the MC is not OP from the beginning, nor does he have a significant knowledge about the world of harry potter, however, uses his brain to try and decipher the actions which have taken place, may take place and slowly piece together clues to some outcome. Good paragraph spacing and world creation, the author did not rely heavily on stats to make each chapter longer as filler, instead incorporating different points of views of each character. Great job! In my opinion, at this point it feels like either reading or watching the series, with some twists that MC-Milo has tried to uncover before the occurrence, however, he lacks the societal knowledge to explain his thinking without making it seem like he is non-comprehensible. perhaps in the future, someone will be able to find the link between his origins from a PC in the Harry P0tter world, and possibly make the MC a bit smarter ( i mean in a way that he can memorize spells from both is original world, and the world he has been transported to) looking forward to more chapters and please continue with the great work you are doing! ok please read this novel, it's really intressting if u like harry p0tter and a non OP MC, but with high detective abilite!
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