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2018-05-05 16:47

This needs a bit of editing and a better translation. It doesn’t entice readers to read it though it has an interesting synopsis. I hope the translation gets better and better.

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Thank you for your honest feedback. I just want to release more chapters as fast as I can. But rest assured that after I published more chapters, I'll go back to the first chapters to translate it better.

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