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angrychihuahua
angrychihuahuaLv137yr
2018-05-13 14:33

13/05/2018 I’ve read up to chapter 7, and I have to say that I’m hooked! I have no problem reading though the story, not a lot of grammatical errors. The author spent time preparing the story like kneading the dough before baking it. I don’t mind waiting a bit for action, if that means the author would have time to really prepare and write a good action scene. So far the story is about the MC reincarnating into the world he created, but the things that he used to know are altered by AI system of the game. I’m going to wait and see how this story develops. I hope it will lean on the magic and spell-casting side, but I know there will be some sword play since the he will be the spellsword or something. Please don’t go the normal sword-master-with-some-magic route, the way you introduced the magic system seemed really good. In conclusion, the story is a good read. However, it’s still in its early stages, we will have to wait and see how it will develop.

The Shadow Spellsword.

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