Review Detail of SPECTRALE in Alchemy Emperor from Modern World

since your new i am going to go easy on you, to summarise my thoughts about the novel, -too rushed and confusing -your thoughts are scattered and in desorder my advises: -slow down, take it easy and at a steady pace in the chain of events -put your thoughts in order, like finish an event before starting another, well that's it for now i will add this one to the library and maybe read it later when it had been re-writen