This story is very well told with a engaging world building system, and has some good dialogue. I would however like to see more important secondary characters introduced. It's a shame that he can't introduce more chapters until this legal problem has been settled, but to me it's worth waiting for. Overall a great read! I can't wait to read the finished product, well Done.
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