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It’s a very interesting novel. It has a unique feel to it, and I especially liked the part with your magic elements (mine are Dark, Water, Fire, Air and void). Some advice is for you to cut your paragraphs shorter. It’s not that bad when read on a pc, but on a phone or something of that sort, they are very large, making it hard to read. All in all, very good novel, I hope you continue writing it.
What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.
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In chapter 4 I do this, remember, Dawson is the one writing an autobiography (surprised, spelled that correctly when bad at spelling), so please, If you like the story, read to the fifth chap is all I ask (sure, that's the most recent, but I hold to a rule, *if you can't get into it in 5 chapters//episodes, just don't bother* so I ask you to do the same.;,;.)