Review Detail of JohnnyKbca in What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.

Item: What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.
Rating: 4.8

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JohnnyKbcaLv45yrJohnnyKbca

Writing style, at least in the beginning, is kinda cramped with long blocks of text - Though it does get better at chapter 5. Really enjoyed the world building and character design, though I found the dialogue weird sometimes.

What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.

DeJeL

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DeJeLAuthorDeJeL

Thanks for the honest review... yah, that part in the early chapters (1-1/2 way through 4) was a plot feature to be explained in story.;,;. Also... what about the dialogue did you find weird... how I executed it, or what was said, or both?

5yr