Review Detail of Eustoma_Reyna in What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.

Your novel seems interesting... ill stop to Chapter 6 since ive mentioned bfore im a sucker for romance... hehe But keep up the good work and just continue what u love to do and this is ur novel so continue to deliver what u want to convey to readers with confidence. I received this comment on my novel bfore too like they are reading a wall of text. Now i understand since im reading yours thru mobile. First 5 to 6 Chapters seemed like that. Not good thru mobile reading so break your paragraphs in my opinion hehe. Anyways goodluck with ur novel/s... Cheers!