Review Detail of MishalZamir in What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.
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Okay so here I see comments about your writing style being a little weird but when you start reading something intriguing that makes the mistakes a little unnoticeable. You novel combines your resourcefulness and creativity! Well, I'm not a fan of fantasy novels (I know what a weirdo I am) xD but this novel gripped me a little despite the fact that the chapters were long or is that I write very short chaps! but your vocab is fine and the background design is stable. Keep writing! ^^ x
What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.
DeJeL
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Thanks for the review.;,;. May I know what scores you gave me? (I see I got between a 3 and a 4 overall, but that does not tell me where you think I have room for improvement, and how much so.;,;. IE I score myself like this Score: WQ 4/5 SoU 4/5 SD 4/5 CD 4/5 WB 4/5 I know I can improve everywhere, but I also know I am always trying my best.;,;.
DeJeL:Also, advrage chapter leingth is 1500 words... my first few chapters are a bit long (close to 2500 words).;,;.