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Review Detail of Hokobishu in What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.

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Hokobishu
HokobishuLv145yrHokobishu

I can't say I particularly enjoyed this, reincarnation is one of my favorite for this kind of genre, but at the same time I feel a lot was glossed over in just the first chapter alone. Especially the end, it feels rushed. Other than that you regularly release and the writing itself is really good.

altalt

What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.

DeJeL

Liked it!

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DeJeL
DeJeLAuthorDeJeL

*Flashbacks*, yes, the first 'book' is meant to seem a bit rushed, the second will be action packed... but the third+ will fill in any plot holes I leave, and will have many flashbacks to add more background information on all the characters (second book will also have some flashbacks, but not that many.;,;.) This is one of those you can't fully appreciate without having read the full thing... so with it being unfinished, that will be awhile (like 8 years at current pace.;,;.) Anyway, thanks for the honest review.;,;. and I personally ask people to read the first 5+ chapters before a review... but I understand if you were unable to due to the first 3 and 1/2 chapters having text blocks.;,;.