Review Detail of Daenir in What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.

The writing quality can definitely be improved. The updates of 1 chapter a week will be problem for us 'Chapter craving individuals.' But it's understandable as it is a new book? And everyone has their own things to do. The story was good, just needed a little bit of improvement in writing. (The first few chapters.) Im not really a fan of early romance and different POVs. I hope you will continue writing and improving. The story has potential, keep working hard. FIGHTING!