First of all, the writing style was confusing. It's unusual, mixed of tenses, incorrect grammars, etc.. fortunately it's still understandable. Updates wise, this one is currently in hiatus so I would have to give u 3 stars for now. Well, that's all for the bad things. The good things are I like the story development and world background. This novel is unique and rather well paced. Character design was ok.
DeJeL
Liked it!
LIKEThanks for the honest review... I feel that rating down for update stability due to a hiatus that has been announced before the following chapter was supposed to be released should not be counted against an author.... also, for the grammar and tense issues... I do have the google drive links, whereas anyone can directly suggest edits... please use them to help me see them, cause I can't seem to see such in my own work.;,;. Anyway, thanks again for the honest review.;,;.