Review Detail of BeyondBreaking in What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.
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Don't trust my review, This is a review based only around 5 chapters + prologue If you want my honest opinion Writing Quality - 3/5 - Was going to give a 2/5, but seeing the improvement from chapter 5 I gave another. Text blocks, speech tags, dialogue issues followed by rough transition. One notable example is where one character talks with modern day English but when you switch the point of view to him, it becomes thee olden form Stability of Updates - 4/5 - Seeing the intervals where the chapters were made, not the best, but I'll give a slight curve. You can see notable improvements in the fifth chapters but you also see a large amount of time from the fourth to fifth meaning the quality only came with time of editing. Story Development - 4/5 - Not the best and rushed before the third chapter, you just get random scenarios placed upon the readers that ruins the immersion of the reader. Character Design - 3/5 - One-sided characters. Some characters have some strange reactions and weird doings that makes them out of character. World Background - 3/5 - Only small snippets of magic affinity and city name, no background information Overall - 3.4/5 - Better than most original novels here but not top grade. This novel is good aesthetically and paradise for taking those who wished they were in 'isekai' situations just out of the blue.
What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.
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Thanks for your honest review... I understand and agree with any point I don't point out below... if I point it out below, I will say exactly how I feel about it: Text blocks are a plot feature until half-way through chapter 4 "One notable example is where one character talks with modern day English but when you switch the point of view to him, it becomes thee olden form" this is explained if you read it thoroughly.... do you think in your second language? Most people don't... so nor does he... now some would say "Old English" is not a different language, but it might as well be.;,;. "Seeing the intervals where the chapters were made, not the best, but I'll give a slight curve. You can see notable improvements in the fifth chapters but you also see a large amount of time from the fourth to fifth meaning the quality only came with time of editing." no, It was just weird to keep it at a rate of once every 4 days, when most people did it daily, or so many per week, so I chose to do it once per week.;,;. Once again, thanks for your honest review, I really appriciate it.;,;.