Review Detail of killermniko in What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.

So for all of those complaining about chapter 1-4, the author breaks it down in chapter 5 for everyone. He adds in their name at the end. I think this is a new creative way to let people know whos talking. Something you would see in playwright. I think this is a great slice of life in another world. So my score for it would be 4/5 5/5 5/5 4/5 3/5. You are slowly working on your writing ability and it shows. Work on your world building a bit better to let people see from your characters point of view, but at the same time know where and what is around them. I think you are doing a good job. Keep it up!