Review Detail of Ruruci in What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.

Alright, Like the above status said, I made this review at the 8th chapter. I don't want to go through what other people already mentioned since I believe the point has already been on a few things I consider secondary on webnovels. I gotta mention this since I've dropped a lot of novels translated or not; the amount of text walls and spacing from the first few chapters really pushed my buttons. I read somewhere that there was a reason for it to be explained in the future chapters but that made me stop and take a break to make myself happy again before diving in for another read. This is especially worse when I tried reading it on my phone. Though it gets better after chapter 5. (lining spacing lining spacing) Though after chapter 5, the author notes at the beginning kind of throws me off. Maybe it's just my own preference but announcing something that is going to happen takes a lot out of whatever surprise I would have enjoyed getting or realizing as I continue reading. Next would be the identification of whoever is speaking. You can either just do a ****** format like [Dawson: i said this or that] or ["i said this or that" Dawson said with a straight face.] It would give more for the readers to imagine especially since the novel is descriptive of it's characters. Also, If you're not dead set on the format of announcing the change whenever point of views change, you can change it for a better transition. like instead of [Point of view -- Dawson] to something like, [Dawson, Castle grounds, 5pm] or something else you can come up with. Because readers don't like to be told things that are blatantly obvious. (I've had a bad experience with this but that may just be my own preference) It's a very interesting read and I look forward to more chapters. It's just that I'm the type to binge and would hate it if I stopped at somewhere really good so I would wait til this gets a lot more chapters before I continue further.