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Review Detail of drefond in Legend of the Empyrean Blacksmith

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drefond
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Writing Quality: If in the translation of google was legal, then it is decent ... but excessively detailed and divinizes the protagonist from the first evolution. Stability of Updates: I did not follow up Story Development: good, until introducing the emperor system, which completely changes the protagonist and turns him into an incredible man who, despite saying that the challenges are very difficult, he completes without any preparation and soon after receiving the challenge (and the author loses inspiration and he wins by luck and in a way surprises ... he only kills the helpers (with super venom darts) before fighting directly with the patriarch and killing him with a surprise attack done in front of him, disregarding the ability to divert or to feel the energy accumulated in the weapon), which as a reward receives a low art divine bid that automatically gives him the knowledge of "" "" "" basic "" "" "" "" "" of how to use a spear and soon after a personage faces hundreds of levels greater than him and is superior to her in one aspect of the spear) Character Design: legal some things the author forces for the progress of the work but nothing much, not to be clear by the absurd and illogical talent that the protagonist has him being a mortal, orphan and undernourished, and the author's failed attempt to give depth and the protagonist retelling past deeds and repeatedly emphasizing that he has an incredible will (which only appears when it is convenient) even though we already know this from the beginning (the author is also lazy to think about the powers of the spirits and presents only what the protagonist will want and makes the protagonist seem dumb and ***** for not looking at the other options available) World Background: fuse rpg with wuxia in an interesting way, exaggerate in some things is not bad, just tiring to read and another fucking protagonist who does "difficult" things easily, receives a lot of the system and so on, I even think that if you read the first chapters (up to 2 evolution, that of space, and skip 30-40 chapters you will be able to understand what happened up there without any difficulties).

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IPreferLonerMc
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I always skill the 5 star reviews cause those are most likely written by retards. These reviews are the ones that reveal the true nature of a story, thanks.

IPreferLonerMc
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I always skill the 5 star reviews cause those are most likely written by retards. These reviews are the ones that reveal the true nature of a story, thanks.

IPreferLonerMc
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Skip*

IPreferLonerMc:I always skill the 5 star reviews cause those are most likely written by retards. These reviews are the ones that reveal the true nature of a story, thanks.
Earthshaker34
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does difficult things easily? really? at least read the first volume and then do a review...

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3
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Exactly

IPreferLonerMc:I always skill the 5 star reviews cause those are most likely written by retards. These reviews are the ones that reveal the true nature of a story, thanks.
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3Lv10Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3

Exactly

IPreferLonerMc:I always skill the 5 star reviews cause those are most likely written by retards. These reviews are the ones that reveal the true nature of a story, thanks.