Review Detail of Zicon in Dimension System

will he absorb earth into his own world

So except devouring the world what else can system do(store, abilities?)? Does the devoured land disappear from the planet and does he need to take in the land according to elements or rarity or randomly?

Esta si es una historia de "cultivo" xddd

The character reincarnated into another world in the first volume. He might go back in a future volume but would have to find a way back first.

Might i suggest you read the work of David Eddings Belgariad Series Mallorean Series Belgarath the Sorcerer Polgara the Sorcerers and the Rivan Codex. I think if you do it'll make all your future writting a lot easier.

You got something here bro. Keep it up have a regular update and the fan's will follow.

Your cover... That hand holds the earth or world, no? Sorry to say but it looked like an ancient green outlandish egg.. Photoshop it make it rounder?? Like your profile pic is way better, dont stretch them world... Be more dilligent! Fighting!

Forgive this humble author. It's just something I whipped up in photoshop so it wasn't blank. I'm by no means an expert. I'll try to improve the cover tomorrow and update it something (hopefully) better.

Hay 1st and 2nd chapter is The same do something about it

Cool cover art, I'm following

Will there be a romance subplot?

Nothing for the immediate future planned but it may come later in the story.

*spoiler* why did you let his parents know that he had a system

Idea for potential antagonist: Mc discovered a mirror that reflex the most horrid/ menace version of the person image that was capture with the mirror, and the Mc’s image happened to get captured by the mirror. Outcome is an evil version of the Mc. The evil version of the Mc also have the system making it formidable. Ps idk what other function does the system has, but if it had something like summons meteorites then the Mc is doom

The two battle it out. Conclusion the Mc won, then he imprisoned and chained the evil image of him into the system. The Mc acknowledge that the evil version of him is more OP than him, and plan on using it as his trump card when emergency situations are call for, because, if the Mc is careless the evil version’s conscience will take over the Mc body. So unless the Mc is in a dire stage he will not use it no matter what. That’s my idea, but you don’t have to use it since it’s you’re novel and I don’t want to force my idea on you cause I’m not the author. Anyway good luck

At this time, I cannot confirm or deny, the existence of the mirror dimension. (But you might see this idea later in the story)

It's just the way the story ended up being written. Fan input was taken into consideration for the decision.

Okay but will he tell his parents that he is not the orignal (the guy mc took over)

i want spoilers

Yes he will tell them the truth when it comes up again