Review Detail of System02 in To Live Again

Item: To Live Again
Rating: 1.6

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System02Lv146yrSystem02

So far its a good start. Just need to be edited as there were some sentences that doesn't flow nicely. Also, it would be nice if the chapter is long so that more description regarding the background can be fully described.

To Live Again

Marumasa

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MarumasaAuthorMarumasa

I imagined it would be like that since it is my first time doing this kind of thing. I really appreciate the feedback and hope I can improve as I grow as a writer.

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