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Well, i Write this for fun anyway so first of all, Thank you to the Author for writing this wonderful book. Without you, mallaza would never be born, one thing i hope or should i say.... a request? Please stabilize the chapters release at least one chapter per day for 5 days in a week, the more the better. Darn, i lost some inspiration now, i hope you as healthy as always and everyday in your life are going to be an awesome day for you. Keep writting, because once you pick the pen you shoulder many expectations, anticipation, and dreams of all your readers. You are a gifted man, in this aspect, the talented is always get obstructed by many challenges and i hope you remember of what i said earlier, never give up. It's okay to take a rest sometimes, but please, never abandon your another life as an author. Inspiration, everybody have it. But to change them into words and inspire another people, that's rare if you take into accounts Millions of people. Even if it's just a Line of poem can change people lives. So, all the best, may Allah bless you and your familyđ. (P.S: Sorry for my bad Englishđ )
The Ruler
Jaegeral
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First of all, I would like to thank you for honestly expressing your thoughts on this, Lonely_Road. A review so good that makes one want to continue writing this novel. And let us now address the matter about the release rate, as you already know, I wrote this novel on a sudden whim. And it happens to be my first time writing a novel, so I lack anything, but motivation. But a sensible person takes all the worst scenarios into account, even when all the odds are in favor of him. And I am also a student shackled by the chains of studies, so I can't make promises that I eventually won't be able to fulfill. But what I can say is, that I won't abandon this project unless it's absolutely necessary. And thanks for the blessing, btw! May Allah also bless you and your family. Amen!
Jaegeral:First of all, I would like to thank you for honestly expressing your thoughts on this, Lonely_Road. A review so good that makes one want to continue writing this novel. And let us now address the matter about the release rate, as you already know, I wrote this novel on a sudden whim. And it happens to be my first time writing a novel, so I lack anything, but motivation. But a sensible person takes all the worst scenarios into account, even when all the odds are in favor of him. And I am also a student shackled by the chains of studies, so I can't make promises that I eventually won't be able to fulfill. But what I can say is, that I won't abandon this project unless it's absolutely necessary. And thanks for the blessing, btw! May Allah also bless you and your family. Amen!
I'm sorry to say this but don't you think the prologue isn't intriguing enough, well the descriptions are great but too many details yet not so interesting, I mean the whole point is Mallazan chased by a squadron of knight right? But I like the idea anyway, and thanks for your hard work!đ
Jaegeral:First of all, I would like to thank you for honestly expressing your thoughts on this, Lonely_Road. A review so good that makes one want to continue writing this novel. And let us now address the matter about the release rate, as you already know, I wrote this novel on a sudden whim. And it happens to be my first time writing a novel, so I lack anything, but motivation. But a sensible person takes all the worst scenarios into account, even when all the odds are in favor of him. And I am also a student shackled by the chains of studies, so I can't make promises that I eventually won't be able to fulfill. But what I can say is, that I won't abandon this project unless it's absolutely necessary. And thanks for the blessing, btw! May Allah also bless you and your family. Amen!
Jaegeral:First of all, I would like to thank you for honestly expressing your thoughts on this, Lonely_Road. A review so good that makes one want to continue writing this novel. And let us now address the matter about the release rate, as you already know, I wrote this novel on a sudden whim. And it happens to be my first time writing a novel, so I lack anything, but motivation. But a sensible person takes all the worst scenarios into account, even when all the odds are in favor of him. And I am also a student shackled by the chains of studies, so I can't make promises that I eventually won't be able to fulfill. But what I can say is, that I won't abandon this project unless it's absolutely necessary. And thanks for the blessing, btw! May Allah also bless you and your family. Amen!
Your concerns are valid. If you go and look back at the prologue's author note, I have said that it's not up to the mark. I think I should rewrite it. Any ideas? And as for the cover, I have submitted a request to Qidian for it. Haven't received it yet, tho. Btw, I have made some changes to the protagonist's personality, which you might not have noticed. He might not be the trickster you think him to be.
LonelyRoad:And the book cover.. I mean it's like a slender man not a trickster..
Done. The prologue was rewritten. Kindly read it. I will let others know about it in the next chapter's author note.
LonelyRoad:And the book cover.. I mean it's like a slender man not a trickster..
Jaegeral:Your concerns are valid. If you go and look back at the prologue's author note, I have said that it's not up to the mark. I think I should rewrite it. Any ideas? And as for the cover, I have submitted a request to Qidian for it. Haven't received it yet, tho. Btw, I have made some changes to the protagonist's personality, which you might not have noticed. He might not be the trickster you think him to be.
And 'the past' chapter, isn't his deceased brother too overpowered? Because there's a limit to how human body can reach through pure physical training, and you haven't introduce any cultivation method or something similar.
Jaegeral:Your concerns are valid. If you go and look back at the prologue's author note, I have said that it's not up to the mark. I think I should rewrite it. Any ideas? And as for the cover, I have submitted a request to Qidian for it. Haven't received it yet, tho. Btw, I have made some changes to the protagonist's personality, which you might not have noticed. He might not be the trickster you think him to be.
Don't worry, I am going to introduce something similar in the following chapters, so just be patient.
LonelyRoad:And 'the past' chapter, isn't his deceased brother too overpowered? Because there's a limit to how human body can reach through pure physical training, and you haven't introduce any cultivation method or something similar.
Jaegeral:Don't worry, I am going to introduce something similar in the following chapters, so just be patient.
Jaegeral:No worries. I welcome feedback any time. Anything you'd like to point out?
A quick question: what do you see in the cover of this novel? Like could you maybe explain the colour or background or the person in it?
LonelyRoad:Not at the moment sir!đ
On my library it's a slenderman with spider claws on his back and in the book description there's a death God standing alone on the shore
Jaegeral:A quick question: what do you see in the cover of this novel? Like could you maybe explain the colour or background or the person in it?
I see. Now I want you to imagine, that it's your first time coming across my novel, and you see the cover with the death god in it and then read the synopsis, what would you think? Would you hesitate to read it? I am thinking of changing the cover and the synopsis as I think it would turn off some potential readers. So I want you to be honest.
LonelyRoad:On my library it's a slenderman with spider claws on his back and in the book description there's a death God standing alone on the shore
Hmm... 'Bastard' 'Trickster'= a mischief God like Loki? Or a Boy with mischief grin? Too serious like death God is a no..?
Jaegeral:I see. Now I want you to imagine, that it's your first time coming across my novel, and you see the cover with the death god in it and then read the synopsis, what would you think? Would you hesitate to read it? I am thinking of changing the cover and the synopsis as I think it would turn off some potential readers. So I want you to be honest.
Thanks for your opinion. I will change the whole outlet of the story later. The title, the cover and the synopsis is going to get changed as well. I really appreciate your help, LonelyRoad.
LonelyRoad:Hmm... 'Bastard' 'Trickster'= a mischief God like Loki? Or a Boy with mischief grin? Too serious like death God is a no..?
Jaegeral:Thanks for your opinion. I will change the whole outlet of the story later. The title, the cover and the synopsis is going to get changed as well. I really appreciate your help, LonelyRoad.