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SOSL
SOSLLv32yrSOSL

Hey, I am new to this but here's what my opinion is: I love the plot and the characters - plz keep writing! WARNING: SPOILER ALERT - don't read if you haven't read the novel The story is an amazing dystopian however the underlying development of character awareness (e.g. of their own body) needs to be revised. (normally people wash/bath themselves every day or so - I know that the characters don't have much access to clean water/water sources though). Lol sorry, I just really want the MC to find out about the omegaverse! Despite this the plot is excellent, and I absolutely love the juxtaposition/contrast of the MC and ML. PLEASE KEEP POSTING CHAPTERS - this is my favorite/#1 story! (you could do a mass release!) <3 :) I absolutely adore your writing style! BTW - I really don't mind if you go over the usual word count for each chapter - More for me to read!

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The Black Out

Froschmo

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Froschmo
FroschmoAuthorFroschmo

To think you noticed that.. hahah, thanks for the reminder! 😂 actually I aware about the awareness of the character, just that each times I was writing, I become more focused with the plot instead, so little detail like this always passed my mind like a breeze and became forgotten lol. My bads, I will try to remember them more! Thanks so much for the review!

SOSL
SOSLLv3SOSL

That's ok - guess it is easy to get into the thick of it and keep writing Just happy to help! :) You are going really well and I absolutely love the chapter today - Dom is becoming very likeable!

Froschmo:To think you noticed that.. hahah, thanks for the reminder! 😂 actually I aware about the awareness of the character, just that each times I was writing, I become more focused with the plot instead, so little detail like this always passed my mind like a breeze and became forgotten lol. My bads, I will try to remember them more! Thanks so much for the review!
Froschmo
FroschmoAuthorFroschmo

glad you like it!! <333

SOSL:That's ok - guess it is easy to get into the thick of it and keep writing Just happy to help! :) You are going really well and I absolutely love the chapter today - Dom is becoming very likeable!