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Kirora
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2018-05-24 21:55

Very interesting storyline and great set out on the main character, we know his goals what he wants to do, why he wants to do it and how has he came to be where he is. The world is earth but another world has invaded which is the monster world and now it’s called destroyed earth (in my mind) With the grammar mistakes there is only 2 or 3 but the author does seem to go back and edit the chapter for a more fluid read which is great. With the stability of updates... By the looks of it so far, it’s a stable release rate which is 1 to 2 chapters a day or maybe even three, the author seems to be carefree about the novel but does like feedback to improve his mood on the day or maybe even improve the novel. The author of this novel is awesome and anyone who hasn’t started reading this should at least try it out. (This novel does have system with MC so whoever is getting tired of the system stuff in novels and that’s me as well... DON’T WORRY!! Somehow MYSTERIOUSOLDMAN, the author has hooked me in on the first chapter and throughout all the chapters I’ve read he (I believe ‘he’) has integrated the system into the story really well, not too much stats nor too less that we don’t know the MC’s power. Overall great novel, I would’ve given the novel a 5 star but I need more chapter releases to deduce if the stability is indeed perfect.

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yamcee
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thanks for the kind review. :D

Kirora
KiroraLv5

Changed your name? Lookin cool👀. Still love mine though... 🤩😂

yamcee:thanks for the kind review. :D
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