Review Detail of Mfonemana_Uduak in Lucy Wickshire

I was skimming the first few chapters and noticed that you were stating it's difficult to edit and write at the same time. I wouldn't mind editing as I read it, partly because I get a twitch anyway so might as well (and yeah, I literally created an account to write this). Only issue is that I'm most familiar with American English, and I've noticed that the spoken tone is more archaic in nature, so I would worry about over-editing. In short, I'd be willing to edit on the fly as long as you're okay with taking a second look to make sure that I'm not overdoing it. Lemme know. It would be a casual thing though at this point--RL first on my end.