Review Detail of Nameless_reget in Fate
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Writing quality is good enough to read, updates there isn't much to talk about since there is only one chapter, almost no story development, no characters that are really mentioned, and this writing basically is just world background
Fate
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Interesting concept through because some of characters do that though they don't really kill the people that have birth to them however people in our world how any won't kill a lot of living things and can they honestly say that if they had the chance to be an immortal and really have the wish to do so would they not kill huge amounts of living being? And even if they sincerely wish not to kill in the beginning how many would change and how many would not change and even then how many would come to be an immortal or have powers to fight against them and of them how many did and how many of them are together because I am sure it would not and cannot be a lot of them who wish haven't changed
Nameless_reget:Interesting concept through because some of characters do that though they don't really kill the people that have birth to them however people in our world how any won't kill a lot of living things and can they honestly say that if they had the chance to be an immortal and really have the wish to do so would they not kill huge amounts of living being? And even if they sincerely wish not to kill in the beginning how many would change and how many would not change and even then how many would come to be an immortal or have powers to fight against them and of them how many did and how many of them are together because I am sure it would not and cannot be a lot of them who wish haven't changed