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Review Detail of Foxo in New Earth- The Dungeon of Madness

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Honestly a bit disappointing. First off the characters backstory seems completely inconsequential with the mcs personality. He’s supposed to be an experienced killer who was betrayed but you see nothing to support the effect this would have on an actual person. No distrust of others whatsoever, to the point that he completely trusts the first person he meets and tells them EVERYTHING about him. This makes no sense at all. The only reasonable explanation I can find is that he trusts her because she’s a girl. There are some other minor issues but this is the one that made me lose all interest in this character. It’s fine if you want to gradually rehabilitate the mc but do it slower not within the first 2 chapters. It’s almost like the main character described in the synopsis was a completely different character that the author scrapped as soon as they started writing and never went back to change the synopsis of the novel.

New Earth- The Dungeon of Madness

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