Review Detail of giancarlo812 in Waking in another World
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" starts getting the shakes and eye twitches like a crack addict " i need new chapters to read , this novel is really good , please man , i need my fix , at least once a week , i'm begging you , " hands are very shaky " . Seriously though this is a well thought story with depth a good plot , interesting scenarios , good organic flow and likeable themes
Waking in another World
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Hey man, I appreciate your interest! I'll try to write over the weekend, maybe I can get back into it... It's just, there are some small things I really dislike about my own story already, me being a perfectionist not really helping the case. I've always written free flowing out of my head, with a general sense of direction so I know what's going to happen, just not how. I can promise you to at least finish the escape ark :)
thnx for the response but i'm not a grammar nazi and i enjoyed the story well enough as it is written , to me your grammar isn't bad at all , i understand if you want to be better at writting ,my only issue is i really want to see more chapters , the connection the two mc's share is unique and the hint that they will grow stronger together is exiciting and interesting
eSaltcracker:Hey man, I appreciate your interest! I'll try to write over the weekend, maybe I can get back into it... It's just, there are some small things I really dislike about my own story already, me being a perfectionist not really helping the case. I've always written free flowing out of my head, with a general sense of direction so I know what's going to happen, just not how. I can promise you to at least finish the escape ark :)
Hey, quick update, I've started writing already but I have some stuff coming up next week (School). So I don't know if I'm going to able to finish the chapter.
giancarlo812:thnx for the response but i'm not a grammar nazi and i enjoyed the story well enough as it is written , to me your grammar isn't bad at all , i understand if you want to be better at writting ,my only issue is i really want to see more chapters , the connection the two mc's share is unique and the hint that they will grow stronger together is exiciting and interesting