Review Detail of eSaltcracker in Waking in another World
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Well, since I can't really give myself a bad score, although, I know there are many mistakes in my writing style and everything is kinda jumbled, I think, my story will be quite good to read, I'm open for your criticism, so if you find something, that needs improvements, leave a review, or a comment will also do the job. As for the story, I have many things I think about when I lay in bed, many stories, that formed over time, and, this is a mix of many of them, placed in a world, that is whole, makes sense, and is worth writing. I have many other ideas I would love to write about, but, I don't have the time for that, alone 1 chap of this takes me up to 3 hours to write, and there are many mistakes inside, so I need to learn more about editing. I try to embellish the things around the world as much as possible because I believe that that is the core for imagining the story in the way, that I do. After all, I want you to move along with me, in this world, not just create parts of a random world, where things happen. If you want to be an editor, just leave me a comment, I'd be glad to have one!
Waking in another World
eSaltcracker
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Hehe, if I don't treat myself good, then who do I treat well? Anyways, I need to think about the Synopsis a bit, I haven't rly made up my mind with where I want to go with the story, I'm just writing freestyle. Thanks for the info tho!
PottedRosePetal:Lol you really did give your book everything... Likes, stones etc xD you could make the synopsis a little bit better... its kinda pointless like that.
heh im also working on a book. maybe you will try it once i make it public xD Ill keep sassing you on your chapters so dont worry ill notify you xD
eSaltcracker:Hehe, if I don't treat myself good, then who do I treat well? Anyways, I need to think about the Synopsis a bit, I haven't rly made up my mind with where I want to go with the story, I'm just writing freestyle. Thanks for the info tho!
Haha, sure, I'm in a lack of books to read, I just recently started IRAS and I almost caught up now.
PottedRosePetal:heh im also working on a book. maybe you will try it once i make it public xD Ill keep sassing you on your chapters so dont worry ill notify you xD
heh try Ancient Godly Monarch afterwards, its one of the rare books i could actually stand 1 k chaps.
eSaltcracker:Haha, sure, I'm in a lack of books to read, I just recently started IRAS and I almost caught up now.
Hai, don't mention it, I really hated the retar*** parts of IRAS, I skipped at least 100 chaps filled with stupid racist slur and idiotic behavior. So hard to find a book where he uses all his resources, like Release that Witch or something. I heard a lot of things about AGM, will check it out later.
PottedRosePetal:heh try Ancient Godly Monarch afterwards, its one of the rare books i could actually stand 1 k chaps.
eSaltcracker:Hai, don't mention it, I really hated the retar*** parts of IRAS, I skipped at least 100 chaps filled with stupid racist slur and idiotic behavior. So hard to find a book where he uses all his resources, like Release that Witch or something. I heard a lot of things about AGM, will check it out later.
I don't know, but I just like how everything progresses, I mean it has its own flaws, but I think it holds up pretty well, it has a pretty solid story so I like it :3
PottedRosePetal:I couldnt stand release that witch lmao
eh maybe i just like romance/harem/love stuff and release that witch doesnt have it. at least not in the first 40 chaps.
eSaltcracker:I don't know, but I just like how everything progresses, I mean it has its own flaws, but I think it holds up pretty well, it has a pretty solid story so I like it :3
Yeah, it's coming, but slowly. And it's kinda not the focus I guess. I think it's laking in that aspect as well.
PottedRosePetal:eh maybe i just like romance/harem/love stuff and release that witch doesnt have it. at least not in the first 40 chaps.
Haha, I have it, but those nasty premium mistakes are the ones I'm making. I don't have the money to spend on the premium at the moment, so I guess I'm stuck with the "normal" mistakes.
Hawkgan2:If you aren’t already using it, grammerly could assist you with battling grammar errors.
eSaltcracker:Haha, sure, I'm in a lack of books to read, I just recently started IRAS and I almost caught up now.
PottedRosePetal:Search for DTSOT to find my book :D Published the first two chapters.
Thanks for asking, right now I have a lot of stuff going on, so I can't write anything, at least not anything good. I'm currently trying to finish one more chapter, then I will change some stuff, I need to focus on school for now, so I can't post chapters reliably.
Chaudhry:When are you gona give more chapters