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rongjin
rongjinLv156yr
2018-07-15 23:59

It’s a good one slow at the beginning but it will change after 35 chapters so guys i think u should give it a shot .............................................

The Chaos of Evolution

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4.4
11 Chs

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aree
areeAuthor

I am reviewing my own novel just to clarify the position of the Novel. It's slow at the start, as I don't want it to be an info dump, still, want to show the beauty of the background world. That's why I am also publishing 2 chapters per day for now. But when the gear change (believe me, it will change soon) it will be a fast ride. How to see you guys with me then. You don't need to vote, don't need to review just comment on the chapter how can I do better, I will be happy. And very sorry for my silly mistakes in the story. Thank you for reading.

6yr

ClemCa
ClemCaLv13

Do you want me to tell you a story? That's the story of how I saw the best novel in the universe. ... I don't know too, but this one is good too!

6yr
BloodHeaven
BloodHeavenLv5

I thinks it’s a well done novel and I love the background story and all the races, but I think I am too stupid to see who the MC is. Author please tell me.

6yr
ExtremePrejudice
ExtremePrejudiceLv6

great... ADDED TO LIBRARY................................................................................................................................

6yr
FourEyes
FourEyesLv12

The background is unique and plot of story is good! About the grammar and twist of story is easily to understand and readable! At first the story is little bit confusing but if you continue reading, maybe you found it is good story. Guys please try reading this novel is worth it!

6yr
amiya307
amiya307Lv4

They story is really slow at the beginning and the background is complex. But as the story progressed it change. I know if you get pass the first 30 chapter then you will see it. It's good to see this novel on the front page. But guys please read first and review later.

6yr
killjoy103
killjoy103Lv4

I am re writing my review to say it's totally worth the try. The first volume is little complicated. Author took an entire volume to introduce the background world. that was little too much. Honestly I feel that worth it. The Author writing style is changing too. Thats good. Most important the story have huge potential to develop. I hope Author can mathup the expectations. All in all I really like it, as it stands now.

6yr
Kritiko
KritikoLv10

Very interesting! readers just have to be patient because in the first few chapters, a lot of foreshadowing is present that almost made it out of place but it will be alright later on. just a few flaws in grammar specially the spelling, but it doesn't affect the content.

6yr
DeJeL
DeJeLLv15

*This review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: The first few chapters feel too focused on the "World Development" not enough character development in them. Also I suggest you make some grammar changes in chapter 5, if you'd like me to go back and point them out specifically I will with a ****** reply to this review. Good Points: I love how you threw in the idea of plains, trains//cars, and subs//boats without directly mentioning them. Also the "No MC" (or, based on what you have said, mysterious MC) is also a good point in my mind, It's unique. Personal Reply: I am sorry, but I do not wish to continue this story, just not of my preferences. I hope you will get many readers and keep on writing (even if your reason to write is to spite the haters, keep it up). You are a cleaver author, and make a decent story.;,;.

6yr
Infinitum
InfinitumLv3

Recommended by a friend an hour ago, well, he was right, the synopsis was really interesting, and really the first chapter is kinda cringe but he told me to bear with it, so... yeah it was good! That friend of mine even lend me his laptop because my phone's dead as of the moment. he was sorry for his low rate, because he was a "first chapter impression" kind of guy. the author should know him, ahahaha.

6yr
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